I picked Rachel as the little girls name as the etymology of the name is Innocent Lamb. Source [1]
The characters names MUST not be spoken throughout the scenes, this allows for the character to call her own name and allow the twist at the end to take effect.
The following Sequences are set in 1978
Scene 1: Dodgems
The night of the fair
Time: 8pm
The screen opens with a Ferris wheel with lights been shown and a lot of traffic from a distance. Credits are shown.
Rachel: Mummy don’t we live the other way?
Mother: Yes darling, I just need to find a phone box, your father will be worried about you.
The car stops at a red light as it nearly shunts another car from behind, this is because the brakes have been cut and the fluid is running low, this will not be made clear yet.
Mother: Sorry
The mother rubs her eyes as if she is upset or worried, because of her divorce.
Rachel: Mummy do you still love daddy?
There is no reply from the mother as the car starts up
Mother: So why didn’t you want to stay with your daddy? He was going to take you to the fair.
Rachel: I don’t like the fair… and I don’t like it when daddy shouts at me.
Mother: He doesn’t shout a lot… does he?
Rachel: Sometimes.
As Rachel says this, a middle passenger shot can be seen of the lights turn red, she screams as aerial shots of the car crashing into various vehicles can be seen.
The camera then looks up through a plastic oxygen mask, everything is blurred and the screen fades to black.
Gameplay:
The character must stand up and move towards the door, she then has to open it.
She walks into a long dark corridor where a light switch can be seen, the character must then turn it on, this lights up the whole corridor.
She walks down the corridor and a doctor can be seen, as she approaches he turns round slowly and pulls a needle out of his arm which he chases the character slowly, the character must then run and find a place to hide, hints will show that it is in a room with the lights off.
The player is then free to move out of the room and explore a little bit until she reaches the stairs of the ward building in which she must chase a little girl (model of Rachel) up the stairs she leads her into a room when the lights turn on it reads on the walls, “This was all you, they’re coming for you”. At this point the little girl cannot be seen. There is then a scream as the character looks scared and it fades to black.
Sources:
Source [1] "http://www.babynamebox.com/r/Rachael.html"
Monday, 31 May 2010
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I think there should be a small cut sequence when the character awakes in the hospital. She could have doctors around her and then she asks where her little girl is. They tell her that she is waiting out side then you take control. Afther leaving the room the door closes behind her. If you reopen the door the doctors have gone and the rooms apperence has changed to one that looks like it has been abandoned for some time.
ReplyDeleteI like what you have so far. seems to work well. It has nice flow but we need to make clear that you are there looking for your daughter more than we have.